Hi everyone! Today I’m going to write about the relevant things that I did the last semester. First, I’m going to tell you that I learned and studied things really interesting and important for my life, but one of the most important things that I learned was in the subject named Clinical Psychology because I did with some classmates a work about the “Cancer”, this work was based in the Humanistic Psychology and through of this work I learned that our diseases can depend on us and our life style. For it, now is very important for me to get a balanced life. Moreover I discovered that I love the Humanistic Psychology.
Furthermore, in the last semester when I had free time I try to share with my friends, my family and my boyfriend because I had to spend too much time on my tests and works. Also on the weekend I went to various parties and I traveled to beach and a place called Graneros that is located in the sixth region of Chile.
Also during my first semester I had to face several challenges, but my principal challenge was learn English because this subject is very difficult for me. For it, this semester I will have to face the same challenge.
Good response Claudia,
ResponderEliminarI understand the feeling of being challenged by a language--Spanish seems to be coming slowly for me. I think you are doing very well with English, though. As you know, it just takes practice. Also, it is nice to hear you disciovered the program you really love. That´s so important in life.
Anyway, here are just a few grammar comments.
--really interesting and important things--remember to put the adjectives before the noun
--work, not A work
--Cancer, not THE cancer (because it is in general)
--I TRIED to share--past tense
--challenge was TO learn--if LEARN is teh main verb after a helper verb, it usually needs TO
Take care
Joe